Hello, I'm Jane!
I' ll have compare and contrast the
'Ranch west camp' and 'Head splash camp'
I would like to go 'Ranch West camp ' than the'Head splash '.
I will talk about advantages of them!
★Ranch West Camp★
- It is in rural area, so nature is good
- We can learn outside
- It is perfect length to study
- We can find a talent by learning what we want
- We can study what we want
- English skill will be improve because we do homestay
- I can stay with unknown people,
☆Head Start Splash Camp☆
- There are lots of water activities because this camp is located nearly from island Cebu.
- The nature would be very good
- There are ESL teachers(qualified teachers)
- There will have no home sick!
Many people belive that 'HSS'(Head Start Splash camp) is better than RWC(RanchWest Camp)
to learn more English. However, I disagree with them.
I think it is fixed idea that people can learn efectively to the qualified teachers.
And, in the RWC, this is homestay camp, so I think it is more
effective to learn more English.
Also, In HSS, the parent should be along with us.
So we wilol depend on parents.
Some dents will annoying because of the parents..
The students will be danger in HSScamp.
Eventhough the view and nature would be very great,students can drown in the beach!
Same with me!! I also prefer tehe RWC as you said. LOL. It was very organized to see how you wrote notes about the camps. Interesting :)
ReplyDeleteHello Jane! This is your roommate, Sharon! I am in class 16. Now, can you guess who I am?? Please add me as your friends.
ReplyDeleteThis is not in the proper essay format. You've used a few of the transition words well but you'll need to organize your essay better and develop your ideas. Look at my example.
ReplyDelete