skill post - fixed..

Hello, I'm Jane.
I' ll have compare and contrast the
'Ranch west camp' and 'Head splash camp'
I would like to go 'Ranch West camp ' than the'Head splash '.
I will talk about advantages of them!

★Ranch West Camp★

• It is held in rural area, so nature is good
• We can learn things outdoors 
• It is held for a perfect length of time 
• We can improve our talents by learning what we want
• Our English skill will be improved because we will be in a home-staying situation 
• I can experience studying and staying with foreign people

          and learn how to stay with people well!!

☆Head Start Splash Camp☆

• There are a lot of water activities because this camp is located in Cebu.
• The environment is good to stay in 
• There are qualified ESL teachers
• There won't be homesick. 

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Many people belive that 'HSS'(Head Start Splash camp) is better than RWC(RanchWest Camp)
Because they can learn English more.

However, I don't agree with them.
I think it is fixed idea that people can learn efectively from the qualified teachers.

Additionaly,  in the RWC, because this is homestaying camp, so I think it is more
effective in learning English.

  Also, In HSS, at least one parent should come along with us.
So we we might depend on our parents.
Some studentsdents will annoyed because of their parents..

The students will be danger in HSScamp.
Even though the view and nature would be great,students may drown in the beach!

Summarizing and paraphrasing

Summarizing
-Many people are feared by the sharks when they swim in the open ocean.
However, actually many sharks don't attack you.
There are more accidents by stucking the lightening or drowning!
If you are still worried by the sharks, there are several ways to prevent you from the shark attacks.
Traveling in groups can reduce the attaking of sharks.
Because sharks like the solitary swimmer.
Also, When you have a cut in body, don't go into the ocean since sharks have a good sense of smell

Paraphrasing
--original one :Traveling in groups is one way to reduce the chances.Bears are very unlikely to attack groups of four or more people.Also, stay calm if you ran into a bear. Bears are much more likelt to attack if you try to run away.

fun post^^

Hello?
I'm jane!
My favorite television program is
'Runnig Man'
It is very fun!
And it broadcasts in Sunday!
I'll have a link of the video!
http://blog.naver.com/jinsul10?Redirect=Log&logNo=60136740819

You can go this blog!!
I think you can enjoy well~
It is the recent one of bthe 'Running man'~~

What the world eats....

http://www.time.com/time/photogallery/0,29307,1626519_1373695,00.html

  Today, I'll talk about what the worlds eat.

That picture is the United State's family.

As you know, There are many overweight people in that country.

I can understand the reason why there are many people who are overweighted.

  Their menus are all meats, pizza, snacks, and many things that there are many calories.

There are Mc Donald, spaghetti, and some fruits such as grapes, and tomato.

However there are no many vegetables in their menu..

In our country, Korea, There are many vegetables, and nutritional things.

  I think there are many problems in United States menu.

Although there are many delicious things, It is not good for our health.

I like our Korean food than the United States foods.

Chain Writing

Today, I participated in the singing contest,
I was the first.I lost. I got the lowest score.
I was depressed and I hit myself.
It was too painful. Then I died. So I became a ghost, now I'm going to kill paradox who got first place. Jane's best friend "Sally" knew that Jane was going to kill Jacob, so sally told him. He was warned. But, Jacob ignored it and he went to bed early. and Jane killed him at nighttime, but Paul, lee, sam and Jim watched it so Jane killed every one. Then a angel came and pulled them out. They had powers to shoot each element. But suddenly, Jane disappeared. But everyone didn't noticed that Jane was gone. The teacher Jerry who was almost eaten by Mr. Tom Reardon knew it. Jerry was so frightened so he took his friend to run away together, Mr. Hwang. While Jerry was running away with him, he suddenly spoke Korean and Mr, Hwang said " EOP violation!!!! I'll never run away with you! Bye!" and ran away from Jerry. After few mintues, he found his old friend, Young-Jin, and ran away together, memorizing the E.O.P. But they couldn't memorize it, and they got a yellow card......

Compare and contrast

(Ranch west camp and Head splash)

Hello, I'm Jane!
I' ll have compare and contrast the
'Ranch west camp' and 'Head splash camp'
I would like to go 'Ranch West camp ' than the'Head splash '.
I will talk about advantages of them!

★Ranch West Camp★

• It is in rural area, so nature is good
• We can learn outside
• It is perfect length to study
• We can find a talent by learning what we want
• We can study what we want
• English skill will be improve because we do homestay
• I can stay with unknown people,

          and learn how to stay with people well!!

☆Head Start Splash Camp☆

• There are lots of water activities because this camp is located nearly from island Cebu.
• The nature would be very good
• There are ESL teachers(qualified teachers)
• There will have no home sick!

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Many people belive that 'HSS'(Head Start Splash camp) is better than RWC(RanchWest Camp)
to learn more English. However, I disagree with them.

I think it is fixed idea that people can learn efectively to the qualified teachers.

And, in the RWC, this is homestay camp, so I think it is more
effective to learn more English.

  Also, In HSS, the parent should be along with us.
So we wilol depend on parents.
Some dents will annoying because of the parents..

The students will be danger in HSScamp.
Eventhough the view and nature would be very great,students can drown in the beach!